OC form Skip Shadowfire (changes made and needs approval)

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OC form Skip Shadowfire (changes made and needs approval)

Post  Shadowranger13 on Thu Jan 26, 2012 1:44 am

Name: Skip Shadowfire

Nicknames(s): Skippy 

Alias(es): Experiment 13 or 13 (only known by scientists at the ranger union and the lab he was created in)

Gender: Male

Sexuality: Straight

Age: 19

Birthday: December 13

Hometown and Region: North Sekra mountains in an abandon lab north of Wintown, Fiore

Trainer Class/Dorm:  Ranger

Hair: Jet black with red tips messily spiked and Wolf like ears hidden in his hair

Eyes: Bright Firetruck Red (glow in dark!)

Clothes: Fiore style male ranger uniform with Obilvia region uniform goggles (the band on the goggles has an orange place on both left and right side with the number 13 inside.) Bright orange armband with a black biohazard symbol on it

Body Style: 5' 4" tall, 165 lbs, slight muscular build, medium tan skin, bright white teeth with enlarged canines (fangs basically) 

Likes: waffles, potatoes, snow, nature, maple syrup

Dislikes: pancakes, rain, thunderstorms, crowds,

Hobbies: Eating waffles, making waffles, being a shadow ranger, talking to potatoes, begging trainers for food(pokemon form only), playing in the snow,

Dreams: to become the best ranger ever and to be the best waffle chef in the world!

Personality: Skip Is a hyper lovable and playful lab experiment made in the one of the shadow pokemon top labs. He was created as the only ranger to stop outbreaks of shadow pokemon by making him a shadow as well and captures them using his custom made shadow styler! He can be serious about his missions but likes making them fun and exciting as well. He never gives up on something or someone worth fighting for even if it costs him his life in the end. He has the abilities to control fire and some very deadly shadow energy. His DNA was alter and mixed with mightyena and houndoom DNA. Skip loves waffles and eats them for every meal if he has to cook….because well… it’s the only thing he knows how to make! Skip also calls himself a potato whisperer so catching him talking to potatoes isn’t uncommon. He lives in an old abandoned lab where shadow pokemon were created at one time. The lab is located in a remote part of the Sekra mountains north of Wintown, Fiore. He also carries a treatable form of rabies. The cure is hard to make due to the rare ingrediants so he wears a medium size vial around his neck just in case! Hes never had to use it yet! Its only deadly to people he bites!

Family: Raised by all the fiore ranger leaders; real family unknown
Friends: Just the shadow pokemon at the lab, the fiore ranger leaders (except Fallcity ranger leader Joel...), Ben, Lunick, Jackie

Starter: Sparky
Team: Sparky, Disaster, Carlos
Favoured Type: Dark and Fire 
Battle Style/Strategy: Uses a shadow capture styler!

Team: 
Nickname: Sparky (male)
Pokemon: Shadow Emolga
Notes: Wears goggles like Skip and is obessesed with peanuts
Moves: Shadow bolt, Shadow rush, Volt tackle, Arial Pursuit

Nickname: Disaster (female)
Pokemon: Shadow Absol
Notes: hates mostly anyone who approaches Skip or trys to hurt him
Moves: Bite, Shadowball, Shadow rush, Slash

Nickname: Carlos (male)
Pokemon: Sawsbuck
Notes: always in winter form
Moves: Energy ball, Stomp, Shadow rush, Bullet seed

Class List:
Period 1: Survival
Period 2: Ranger Class 
Period 3: freetime/lunch!
Period 4: Music
Period 5: Health/P.E
Period 6: Computer Class
Period 7: Battling 101


Last edited by Shadowranger13 on Thu Jan 26, 2012 3:50 pm; edited 3 times in total (Reason for editing : Requested by Tenshi-Chan! ^^)

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Re: OC form Skip Shadowfire (changes made and needs approval)

Post  Tenshi-chan on Thu Jan 26, 2012 8:49 am

I'm going to have a problem accepting this app.... Um a few things need to be changed.

1: The idea of him being able to a pokemon you created. That's a bit out there for me. Could you try something with a pokemon that already exists, and no real transformation, that way he stays human?

2: His pokemon have now moves. I have no problem with them being shadow pokemon, just give them moves. {And don't have them causing havok everywhere either.}

3: Let there be some cure {god forbid he bites anyone} that either takes a while to make, the ingredients are hard to find... something! I don't want another character dying from that bite.

I think that's everything. If you fix these things, I will look back over your app again. Thank you~
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Changes made as requested! ^^

Post  Shadowranger13 on Thu Jan 26, 2012 12:37 pm

I have changed and add the following items Tenshi-chan requested! Hopefully they work out better! Smile

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Re: OC form Skip Shadowfire (changes made and needs approval)

Post  Tenshi-chan on Thu Jan 26, 2012 6:12 pm

Ah, thank you. Those changes made it better for me to accept this.

Well, very nice, very unique! So now, you may be accepted!

YOOMTAH!!!
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